Hi Ashley! The topic is pretty clear within the presentation and at first I wasn't expecting Twitter to be the main subject. However, with the idea of authorship it is very important in the Twitter world. I also think that the videos that you added to the presentation are a good way to show how others create their own pieces within the twitter phase which is encompassed by authorship. There may be too many slides. Many of them held short sentences or thoughts and possibly work on collaborating all the theories together in terms of subject and concentration. I think the using the bluebird is visually clever because of the relationship between birds tweeting and twitter. The photos that your morphed were very interesting and can grasp the readers attention very well. I think the presentation does include many of the lecture elements from class. Especially in the narrative elements and the remixing of items with the music video at the end. One suggestion, go through and look carefully at your spelling and grammar I got a few mistakes. Overall great job!
I first must say that the blue bird is absolutely adorable...*clears throat* but about your presentation...
The Twitter word cloud is a bit blurry, so that might be better if it was a larger sized file...maybe...I'm not a techie by any stretch of the imagination. Although, the blurriness might help your topic by showing through a picture that our thoughts are being distorted and becoming indistinguishable. I really like your presentation so far. It is fun to look at, and it delivers the ideas in a manner that helps the audience focus on what's important. Consider shortening the amount of slides in the presentation, if only to condense the material you have--don't try to include every aspect that you want to cover in your final project. Overall, good job, and good luck with the revising!
Hi Ashley! The topic is pretty clear within the presentation and at first I wasn't expecting Twitter to be the main subject. However, with the idea of authorship it is very important in the Twitter world. I also think that the videos that you added to the presentation are a good way to show how others create their own pieces within the twitter phase which is encompassed by authorship.
ReplyDeleteThere may be too many slides. Many of them held short sentences or thoughts and possibly work on collaborating all the theories together in terms of subject and concentration.
I think the using the bluebird is visually clever because of the relationship between birds tweeting and twitter. The photos that your morphed were very interesting and can grasp the readers attention very well.
I think the presentation does include many of the lecture elements from class. Especially in the narrative elements and the remixing of items with the music video at the end. One suggestion, go through and look carefully at your spelling and grammar I got a few mistakes. Overall great job!
I first must say that the blue bird is absolutely adorable...*clears throat* but about your presentation...
ReplyDeleteThe Twitter word cloud is a bit blurry, so that might be better if it was a larger sized file...maybe...I'm not a techie by any stretch of the imagination. Although, the blurriness might help your topic by showing through a picture that our thoughts are being distorted and becoming indistinguishable.
I really like your presentation so far. It is fun to look at, and it delivers the ideas in a manner that helps the audience focus on what's important.
Consider shortening the amount of slides in the presentation, if only to condense the material you have--don't try to include every aspect that you want to cover in your final project.
Overall, good job, and good luck with the revising!